Trench Hardeen from District 12

[Anna Banana]

Name: Trench Hardeen
Age: 18
Gender: Male
District/Area: District 12
Appearance:

Trench is a 5'9" 145lb young man. He is well built physically from the work he does, but he is thin. He bears a long scar from his forehead down over his right eye to his mouth, and has no left ear. His scar is the result of a scuffle he had with the Peacekeepers. His left ear is gone due to a mining accident, but he doesn't like to talk about that. His hair is dark brown and slicked back onto his head.
His right eye is a white color being almost blind in
that eye from the scar. while his left eye is gold.

He is the proud owner of scars on his back from lashings he has recieved when he yelled down with the Capitol infront of Peacekeepers. He has
a strong square jawline that seems to hve been
broken several times, and he has a thin beard. His
hands are rough and cracked with burn marks visible.

Personality:

Trench is an extremely rebelious person. He hates the Capitol with all of his being and is frequently seen trying to incite rebellion. Aside from being rebelious he is constantly trying to help people and protect people. He feels no compassion towards anyone, and thus gets none in return. If asked to explain why he helps people he would have no answer.

He comes of as a sarcastic, rude person to a passerby, but to those who actually know him he uses his wit to keep his spirits high. People know when he feels comfortable around them because he will begin to joke around with them. He
prefers to use his fists over words when it comes
to helping people. He feels they have never failed him when he needed them.

His greatest flaw is his disregard for the consequences of his actions. He doesn't care who
it affects or how, as long as he succeeded at his
goal. Among other flaws he is often distrusting of most people, and he cares only about the lives of his closest friends. If you were to ask him who he thought was most important to him he would say "myself".

History:

Trench was born into the wealthier part of District 12 his family being merchants. He had nothing to complain about until he reached the age of seven. His parents were found to be guilty of treason and executed leaving Trench an orphan. He found himself suddenly living among the people of the Seam, in the community home. His pride of his former position in District 12 made him the target of contempt from the others at the home.

His life in the Seam was difficult in the beginning,
but he adapted quickly. He found odd jobs to do
among the people of the Seam to keep himself
alive, but only barely. It was one extremely cold
night that Trench realized that something had to
be done. He began to speak out against the
Capitol trying to gain support for his cause.

He had only two true supporters among the
people of District 12, but they were taken away by
the Capitol assumingly made into Avox. Alone but
still very rebelious Trench works hard to fight the
Capitol in every way he could. His heart is now a cold place with little remorse, but he waits the day when he finds someone he can trust.

Codeword: oDair
Comments/Other:

[Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]]

Hey there! So, there are only a few things that I need you to do so he can be accepted. First, why does he look the way he looks? You have several areas in his appearance where you could elaborate, and you need more information there. The information in his personality is great, but you need a few more sentences there to fit the minimum. As for the history, he wouldn't have lived in the Seam alone -- it's more likely that he would be transferred to the community home. Can you fix the spacing in his history as well? It's a bit odd. xD Once you're done with all of that, post here so we can review this again! :-D

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[Anna Banana]

Okay, I made the changes, other than the spacing. For some reason my computer is automatically setting up that spacing when I apply the changes. I always find my character sheet the hardest part of rping, once my character is all set it's easy for me haha.

[Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]]

Accepted!

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