Titanic Vespoli D4 done

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Titanic Vespoli D4 done Sept 3, 2013 14:10:09 GMT -5

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Post by Hafen d4 ⚓︎ minie on Sept 3, 2013 14:10:09 GMT -5

Name: Titanic Vepspoli
Age: 15
Gender: Female
District/Area: District 4
Appearance:

WELL DEFINITELY NOT LIKE A SUNKEN SHIP OR ANYTHING.

Personality:

DO WHAT I WANT, TAKE WHAT I WANT, LIVE LIKE I WANT

History:

UMMMMMMM I HAVE NO PARENTS NO MORE AND A TWIN SISTER AND A CAT AND A BIG MESSED UP FAMILY THAT LIVES IN A BOAT

Codeword: oDair
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Last Edit: Sept 29, 2013 2:57:42 GMT -5 by Hafen d4 ⚓︎ minie

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Titanic Vespoli D4 done Sept 28, 2013 5:30:28 GMT -5

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Post by Hafen d4 ⚓︎ minie on Sept 28, 2013 5:30:28 GMT -5

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TITANIC VESPOLI

The making of the unsinkable ship

You know you were named after a great ship. That was what mama always told me. I was like the great ship itself. I was made to sail far and never go under. I am unsinkable. I was built to last a lifetime. I am perfection. I have this long brown hair, that is long and choppy. I have this pale skin that contrasts with my eyes perfectly. My grey eyes, are like things that can intimidate and love.

I was built with a body that is skinny and slim. I am able to fit in small places and go where I want to, nothing can stop me now. I don't want to be stopped,and I never will be stopped. I will proceed with every movement of my hips and feet. I was built to be a winner in every way. I was built for the perfection I am. You know when a great ship is born. You can see it in the way they walk. You can see it in their every step. You can tell I am a great ship.

When you are still in the making, so when you are still young. It's good to listen to your parents, because who knows how much longer they will be around to tell you the things that will make you a great ship. I listened to them. When my mama told me to never let me be controlled, I made that to my motto. To be uncontrollable. No one takes my steering wheel, except me. Only I can be in charge of where I go and what I do. It has to be like that, and I will never let that change.

The first voyage

"You can do it Titanic, take your first steps" This is something I will always remember, not because my brothers keep telling me that I will never make it. Not because they laugh their heads off even today. No, I will remember that day because it is the only time my dad ever took a picture of my mom and me. I keep it on my desk next to my bed. Every morning I remember the first voyage of Titanic Vespoli.

My little baby feet, were tiny. My feet are still tiny. I had a hard time getting up and having to retry. Once one of my sisters even told me that I got so annoyed that I took the bottle of whiskey from my moms hand and smashed it on the ground. I was always none to have the worst temper and attitude in the family. I guess my siblings thought that was another way to make my life miserable, but oh well, if I have a bottle of whiskey in my hand and a cigarette in another what can go wrong?

Nothing. I'm am sure of that. I am always sure that anything I do has to go right. Most of the time it does, but I have my flaws. They tell me that my greatest flaw is that I believe I'm perfect. I don't understand, they just might be jealous, that I'm so great. They must be jealous that I truly have no control.

Only this time I won't sink

"You aren't the type of ship that would sink? No are you Titanic?" That was a question I knew the answer to. Of course I knew that. Of course I won't sink sank. I haven't sank so far and I never will. I will stay strong forever. I came back from many voyages. I am being what I am. I am a Vespoli. I hit many icebergs, but never have failed to prevail.

I didn't sink so far. I haven't broken down. I have kept moving forward. I swear I will never fail. I'm not allowed to fail. I won't fail. Failure is not an option. This titanic is really unsinkable. My will is to strong. It doesn't matter who many times someone tells me to go to rehab, or to get a life. I refuse to let them see me cry.

They tell me to lay off the alcohol, maybe then I would make sense. Maybe then I won't be a cheap 15 year old party bitch. They tell me to lay off the drugs, or someday I would lose my pretty face. I don't believe them, I'm way to stubborn to believe that I will ever sink into their will. I may hit as many icebergs as I want but this time I swear on my life and on everything that matters to me, that I will never sink.

FC:Chelsea holmes
Plots: VESPOLI FAMILY
Codeword: oDair

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Hafen d4 ⚓︎ minie Veteran Member 1,665 POSTS Pronouns: She/Her last seen May 19, 2024 9:49:04 GMT -5	Titanic Vespoli D4 done Sept 29, 2013 2:58:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hafen d4 ⚓︎ minie on Sept 29, 2013 2:58:02 GMT -5 done yay hopefully another vespoli
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Titanic Vespoli D4 done Sept 30, 2013 2:45:51 GMT -5

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Post by charade on Sept 30, 2013 2:45:51 GMT -5

Ok Minie, let's take a look at what we have here!

Pretty good, but you need one more paragraph of personality to make the requirements.

And the big issue is the references to the titanic. You can keep the name, but in the HG universe, all pre-rebellion history has been lost or destroyed. They just don't know of anything prior to the 1st hunger games other than the war. So, I'm sorry to be the one to say this but you'll have to rewrite any sentences referencing the sinking of the titanic. D:

But once you've done that, she can be accepted!

16 Jul 12, 23:43
GB: I bet you just sit at your computer with a tea cup and a monocle

Hafen d4 ⚓︎ minie Veteran Member 1,665 POSTS Pronouns: She/Her last seen May 19, 2024 9:49:04 GMT -5	Titanic Vespoli D4 done Sept 30, 2013 10:01:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hafen d4 ⚓︎ minie on Sept 30, 2013 10:01:07 GMT -5 edited
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charade Retired Staff 3,811 POSTS last seen May 1, 2024 12:08:12 GMT -5 Thinking	Titanic Vespoli D4 done Oct 1, 2013 22:56:08 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by charade on Oct 1, 2013 22:56:08 GMT -5
	16 Jul 12, 23:43 GB: I bet you just sit at your computer with a tea cup and a monocle