Mave Grenis/11

[Nomnoms]

Name: Mave Grenis
Age: 39
Gender: Male
District/Area: District 11
Appearance:

Mave is 6'2 weighing 280 pounds full armor.

He is bald with dark brown eyes he isn't very tan from usually having his skin hidden behind his Devestator 3-001 V4 armor

Personality:

Mave has always done his job.
it could be killing those who hid instead of working or sitting up in a tower on the southern fence.
He likes to follow the pack being so young he is not very high rank he is part of Devastator which is the group that handles if they happen riots the Capitol formed it a while ago they are just experimenting with it in 11 that is why he has so much armor and so many weapons.

History:

Being so young he is not very high rank he is usually patrolling the streets. Mave is from 11 so there are many people to watch and lots of stuff going on he actually has a record of 400 kills which has earned him some respect from all the citizens that know him.

Codeword: muttations
Comments/Other:

yes that is a kasrkin and hey why not have a peacekeeper get to boss everyone around it will be great!
I mean the games are going on and everyone is walking around, OH,NO sombody needs to enforce the law!

[Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]]

I cannot accept this. For one, there's not enough information about appearance, and it seems a little unrealistic.

[Nomnoms]

Okay then I understand that the appearance needs more but hey why not is it because it isn't the same as everyone else? I think everyone has been doing the same thing over and over and I wana try something different. I am sick of the 15 year old girl who is really nice and great and if you get on her badside your in trouble (trust me there is like 40) or the Career who is really good at fighting with knives and can do extreme Parkor and seeing as everyone has been training with knives since they where young and since everyone has a sword well I think we need something different.

[gm bourgeois decadence [aya]]

Alright, here.

Having a Peacekeaper is perfectly fine. However, this guy is not. You gotta scrap the armor. What did it say from CF abou peacekeepers? They wore those white uniform things and carried guns. They did not have ridiculous armors, so you need to get rid of that. You can have a gun and a flack jacket.

Here's this. Enforcing the law is srs bsns. You're going to need to prove you can have that by fleshing out the profile. Detail, detail, detail.

And, as someone said somewhere, there's no way that killing 400 or so would earn the respect of the people of District 11.

I think that he would have had to be from the Capitol originally, but stationed in District 11...

So, get rid of that armor, flesh out the profile a TON, and then we'll see. If you want me to look at it again, the best way to get me is to drop me an email at [e-mail]

[popcap810ofline P]

Quint it is just as fair for me to make a character with a super power, that lets him fly, and shoot lasers from his eyes . I it just noot in the flavor of the site.

[A Toa's Friend (atoafriend)]

Personally I have no problem with a lead Peacekeeper. But this is just simply too over-the-top. And also I'm not a mod. You just need to know where to draw the line. I could have Terry's leg heal in two days and Zanne on a killing spree, but that's simply too much in my advantage.

[Quint Is Here]

Umm..Pop, you addressed me when you should address Noms. *doesn't want to be confused as being Noms*

[Nomnoms]

why is everyone posting on a OLD character if you don't know yet I am NOT on like I really could care less.