Brittany Pryce {D2 ~ CB#1}

[Cameo {RIP Charlie}]

Name: Brittany Pryce
Age: 34
Gender: Female
District: Two
Mother of: Vanity Pryce (18)
Grandmother of: Brooklyn Pryce (2)

Appearance:
~Short, curly blonde hair
~Blue eyes
~Extremely tall at 6 ft

Personality:
~Completely self-centered
~Rarely kind or liked
~Inappropriately flirtatious

History:
Life had always been spectacular for young Brittany. With breathtaking genetics and a wealthy district two family to be born into, nothing could possibly get better nor fall apart on her. She truly had everything, and just enough to form that ugly attitude that didn’t match her outside appearance. Anyone that didn’t worship her fell victim to her sharp tongue or angered fists. The district revolved around her, and it was a must to understand this…until love began thawing that icy heart.

An array of cute boys had been in her life by the time she hit fifteen, but one in particular achieved more then just catching her eye. Like that she fell head over heels for him, and her personality flipped along with it. Suddenly she was a decent person to say the least, and people actually began to like her, all because of him. Just when she thought her life was already perfect, it became…worse.

There was a lot of gift exchanges between the two lovebirds; but the last one no one approved of, not even him. A baby formed from their love, only to break it. Without hesitation he left her to fend for herself, having a lot more plans then settling down while still a child himself. Her upper class family also held no interest in being known for their fifteen-year-old pregnant daughter. Before she had a chance to protest she was shipped to the other side of the district, promised monthly income if she started anew and forgot about them. So she has, keeping all the money for herself, and making her daughter pay in every which way for putting her here.


Word Count: 299

That thingy: O'Dair

Face Claim: Tricia Helfer

[sbeeg]

Hey there Cameo!
I see you have three parapgraphs but there isn't any description of her appearance besides her being beautiful. She also needs a personality flaw.

Once these changes have been made post in this thread again and the staff will take another look.
Thanks^^

[Cameo {RIP Charlie}]

Only had one word left so I added a couple of bullet points, hope that's enough or I have to rewrite this whole thing. That'd suck. Her personality is all a giant flaw though, she's an uncared for antagonist character.

[sbeeg]

So what you added is great but now you're nearly twenty words over 300. If you can cut back a little it'd be perfect.

[Cameo {RIP Charlie}]

Trimmed it, says 299 words for me.

[sbeeg]

Accepted!