Ayun N'dukwe ~ D5 ~ redone finished

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Name: Ayun N'dukwe
Age: 19
Gender: Male
District/Area: District 5
Appearance:

Ayun is a 6' 2'' and 180 pounds. he is built like an NFL linebacker.
the reason for this is he works out in preparation for the Hunger Games. he is also very strong and he looks it, which him having to control animals all day helps. also so does the fact that he has nothing else to do all day and is constantly training with his friends. he is also pretty fast for his size, and is extremely athletic.

as for looks, he is very good looking and very tan from being outside all day. he has short brown hair with blond streaks in the summer. he has dark blue eyes and can usually be seen in a pair of shorts and his signature leather vest with a cross across its back.

Personality:

this character is a very caring person. he is close to his family and will do whatever he can do to try to protect them. he is a natural leader and doesnt care who gets in his way. hes gonna get the job done, even if it means someone has to die for him to do it. other than his family and close friends, he doesnt talk to anyone and prefers to be by himself. he is headstrong and ready to fight. he is entering the Hunger games and is ready to win. he is als overy close to nature and animals.

Some of his flaws are that he is very arrogant and thinks only about himself. also, he likes to throw his weight around, and that can lead to trouble. another weakness is that he is pretty much always looking for a fight, which can get him in trouble. he also doesnt like to follow the rules and that gets him in trouble with the Peacekeepers.

However, because of his looks, courage, and willingness to fight and lay his life on the line will help him in the Games. also, he is always seen carrying around his main weapon, a steel naginata, whether it be in the fields watching the sheep or in town. (Look it up) His favorite place to be is with his family and he is very caring with them, even if it doesnt look it.

History:

he grew up in a large house with four brothers, two sisters, and four grandparents. since he learned to walk, he was taught about animals, learning how to ride and take care of them. his mother was very good with medicine and would treat sick animals from all over. his dad was very good with animals, horses in particular, os they always had a stable full of them.

when he was 11 years old, his father died in a stampede. he was devestated, which is part of the reason for his coolness towards everyone. after the funeral, he had to take over as the man of the house and discovered he had a natural talent for dogs, and that was how he made the majority of his money, while still helping with the horses.

when he was thirteen, the biggest discovery about his fathers death was made. it was no accident. it was set up by the Capitol. his father had apparently been asking too many questions and they couldnt have that, so he was killed. ever since then he has vowed to get his revenge and does everything he can to fight back against the capitol, which is why he trains hard for the games.

Codeword: muttations
Comments/Other:

i think this is more in depth than my last one was. please accept

[Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]]

1) It would be nice if you would go through and capitalize everything that needs to be capitalized.

2) Again, he has no flaws to his appearance. It would be nice if he had some physical flaws.

3) It would be nice if you would lengthen each of your paragraphs some.


Just fix those things, and then I'll be able to accept.

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