Millie Crane (Edited)

[indigo]

Name: Millie Renee Crane
Age: 12
Gender: Female
District/Area: District 11
Appearance:

Although Millie is only young she is quite the little cutie. She has slightly curly red hair and light blue eyes.
She is skinny and average height, she isn't that athletic but she isn't a bad runner.
She has very pale skin, that rarely tans and a faint dusting of freckles over the bridge of her nose.
She has enough strengh in her petite body to defend herself, however she would most likely not fair well if she had to fight a large group of people.
She has a pretty face, and she is just pretty all together although she doesn't have very many friends she looks like the type of girl that would.

Personality:

Millie is a happy girl, she is kind and caring and is always very optimistic. Some people find her happiness annoying but others enjoy having her around.
She loves making new friends, but she takes a while to really talk to them. She is quite shy although once she gets to know the person she is really outgoing.
Some people find her quite comforting, they like having her around when there upset or just need someone to talk to. She loves being around people and hates being alone.
She is a very brave girl, and she never steps down from a challenge. She has this fear of being alone, she loves being with people and has little freak outs when she is alone. She thinks that everyone that she cares about will leave her if she isn't with them all the time.

History:

As far as Millie can remember it's always just been her and her older sister Shay. There parents walked out on them when they were only young.
Millie never really opened up to anybody but her sister, she tried to make friends with people but it just never worked out the way she hoped.
Millie was always trying to help her sister out, they took care of eachother; or at least that's what Shay always said. Millie sometimes thought that she was taking care of herself, although she knew that Shay tried her best and would never do anything to harm her. Millie got her own food and sometimes even had to get some for Shay.
She never found anybody that she could truely talk to, other then Shay. But all her life she had wanted a friend, somebody to tell her secrets to somebody to talk to when she was having trouble. She had wanted this all her life and she never knew if she would have it.

Codeword: muttations
Comments/Other:

[Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]]

Millie! I know a dog named Millie.. Anyways, it would be nice if you would add more information into the appearance, personality, and history. I find that more detail in my sentences always seems to lengthen my paragraphs greatly.

[indigo]

Yeah sorry about that I was in a bit of a rush. Anyways better?

[Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]]

Much better! Accepted.