magnet district 3

[magnet]

name:magnet Sharp
age:13
district:3
Appearance: I am 78" tall and am about 130 pounds. I have brown hair with blond streaks. It is usually short and spiky or just shaggy.My eyes are the color Hazel. I am probably a little stronger than most. I were shorts and a plain junk shirt and maybe jeans. I am usually covered I smoke or some other material on the days I work. My skin is white that has a lite tan. I have no facial hair I just shave it off. I have massive hands. My hands are about the size of my face. If someone saw me they might think I am older than I am.
Personality: I am nice and loyal to my friends. I am more on the quiet side when it comes to talking. I don't use my last name because i don't think that people need to know that in case I join a group or something. I don't give up easy in any situation. I am also a great problem solver. I don't show that much emotion so my friends call me robot. I really focus on things and notice a couple of tiny details. i don't make jokes i just know what to say at the right time. The first time people my age see me they are a little scared of me. I don't fight unless I have to. I have a slight temper but it rarely goes off for no reason.
History: I was orphaned at the age of seven when my parents both died from sickness. I found a cheap place to live until I could get on my feet. I found a job cleaning up scraps at the factories until I was old enough to get a real job working at the factories. I also learned to have some knife skills while i was on the streets. I also learned boxing skills from some factory workers. I have three friends who deliver packages around town. After work we all hang out play a game called catch the metal ball. We have a small metal ball we throw to each other. After I go home think of an idea and go to sleep. I also have to worry about break ins every now and then. I overall have a pretty good life except when I was seven.
codeword: muttations

[Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]]

Hiya!

I can't really accept your character just yet, because you need to fix a lot of things--

1) Does your character possibly have a last name? It would be nice if you could either find one for your character or explain in his history why he doesn't have a last name and/or doesn't use it.

2) Could you please put the information in the appearance, personality, and history into actual sentences? It's a bit vague at the moment and it doesn't tell us much about your character.

3) Also, could you please add more information into the appearance, personality, and history sections? One line of information tells me nothing about what your character is like, so please add details! A paragraph for each would be nice.

4) Your codeword is incorrect. In the rules, there are many underlined letters hidden in order. Find those letters, and that will give you the codeword.

Fix everything, and then I will accept!

[Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]]

1) Still no last name. Is there a last name? Please specify.

2) You'll need about 3-4 times the amount of information in the paragraphs that you already have for it to even be considered acceptable.

3) Still one letter off on the codeword. So close!

[Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]]

Thanks so much for fixing it and being patient. Accepted!