Amber Phoenix, District 12

[artemisa]

Name: Amber Phoenix
Age: 14
Gender: Female
District/Area: District 12
Appearance:

Amber is a light skin and medium height (5ft. 6in.) girl. She has medium sized, golden colored hair that is usually held loose (this is because her hair is curly and she doesn't want to "damage" it). Her eyes are hazel, although they look brown in the dark. She is skinny but very strong. The thing that most stands from her appearance is her birthmark shaped like a small triangle in the back of her neck.

Personality:

Amber is a very responsable girl and such a perfectionist, especially at decorating things. She is sincere, honest and nice. Amber also is very judgemental when meeting someone for the first time and can develop strong likes or disklikes toward someone. She tends to become very bossy and stubborn when she is doing something that doesn't come out the way she wants it to. Other that that, she is a person that helps others, loves adventures and to be around people.

History:

Amber is an only child.
During her early childhood she was a very happy girl eventhough she had nothing to eat. This all changed after an accident her mother suffered that resulted in her death (which made Amber suffer of sadness for a while). After this, her father became a peacekeeper to bring food to the table since it was the mother who worked while her father took care of Amber. Her father did improve their standard of living but being a peacekeeper resulted in Amber not seeing him much. This of course made Amber very sad but she soon found a way to distract herself by reading a lot of books and then talk to people all about it (which sometimes ended in a big fight because someone would contradict her). She would also spend her time helping people with anything they needed, especially lifting things, and that is the reason she is very strong.

Codeword: muttations
Comments/Other:

[Quint]

I would like to accept this, except that unfortunately your character is a Mary Sue. So, she knows how to wrestle and learns how to wield weapons that are not only almost impossible to find in such a poor District, but also very unlikely for a 14 year old girl to learn. I'd really like you to look over this bio and see what you think could be better, then after that, a staff member will be sure to accept Thank you!

[artemisa]

I fixed it. Can someone please check my character to see if it can be accepted?

[Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]]

I'm sorry, but I still can't accept her. She is still a Mary-Sue because she lacks personality flaws. She may be a "very smart, wise, brave, funny (this rarely shows), defiant, and nice girl." However everyone has something wrong with them. It's impossible not to have some kind of flaw, so it would be nice if you added some to your character's personality before I accept her.

[artemisa]

i have fixed my character, please check to see if it can now be accepted.

[aya]

Yeah, that's better. Accepted.