Aaron Night//D4

[Jasmine ((AKA Jaybird))]

Name: Aaron Night
Age: 15
Gender: Male
District/Area: District 4
Appearance:

Tall, and lean for a boy his age,he is able to run swiftly and swim with an amount of speed.Being about 5'9 he is very strong and can carry about 4-5 sacks of fish. He is about 190 pounds since, even being not the strongest looking man there is but he is still quite the strong-man. . Tanned somewhat more like olive type skin like Jasmine.

Aaron has shaggy brown hair, and silver-gray eyes like his sister. He has high cheek bones, and firm lips, which helps him keep a solid face straight, and unemotional expression. He has a scar going from his shoulder, to his hand, Aaron got is when he was fighting with one of the older boys from his school. Took a knife right to it and he didn't notice till after the fight when he felt light-headed from loss of blood. Aaron has a strong pain tolerance, and would probably have to be cut 100 times before he would notice.

He keeps clean like his sister. He takes a bath every other day, and Brushes his teeth everyday. He keeps gloves with holes for fingers, to keep his rough, hard-worked callused hands from hurting his sister. When he gets nervous, he bites his nail like his sister and even when's he not he likes to keep them short so that they don't get in the way. Doesn't really like wearing a lot of clothing. He is usually wearing a thin, tank top or no shirt at all, most likely with jeans and no shoes.

Personality:

Most of his life, he spent being quiet around others, meaning he has never really tried to talk to others or show emotion when they speak to him. Aaron hates showing emotion, and if he does it's only around his sister and friends. When he speaks, he always has a harsh tone, this makes him avoidable since no one want's to be around someone who will say the truth but with a mean way to it.

When killing or watching someone die, it never reaches his mind that he should be bothered by all this. He doesn't care if someone dies, or if he had to kill that someone it wouldn't matter to him. But if Jasmine where to die of the hands of Aaron himself or someone else, he would surely kill himself or the person who killed her. If he were to go into the Hunger Games, he would make sure he would have the highest amount of kills then anyone.

Once you get to know this kid, everything will start to get way easier. Many who know Aaron for his real self, know that he can be a great comedian and a wonderful friend. When Jasmine or any of his close friends needs advice they go to him to console with. He will listen all night and day is he has to, never to show emotion till the very end of your story.

History:

Aaron was born to his loving parents. They had it great, then Jasmine was born and Aaron thought it was a god send because he had always wanted a sister. They where rather wealthy, but their parents still loved them and spent time with them as much as possible.

One day at The Reaping Aaron was called up. He was just about to step up, when Jasmine cried out loud and someone else took his place. He was kinda thankful for it because Jasmine was going to need him the next few months. There was a flood the next month, it tore through all of District four. Aaron went for Jasmine first, after that they never saw their parents again after that flood.

One day Jasmine didn't come home, Aaron got really worried. He searched the entire District four, he couldn't find her anywhere. He went to the docks, to find her fishing rod floating in the water. He was heart broken, he wasn't sure if Jasmine was dead or alive. He just knew that if she was gone that she wasn't coming back for a while. Then when he walked in the door, there she was. His little Jasmine, at first she was scared he was mad at her. Then Aaron just walked up to her and hugged her. He didn't day a word after that and just went to bed, he wasn't sure what Jasmine thought, but he was just glad she was home.

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Comments/Other:

[Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]]

1) Could you please go through and fix any grammar/spelling/capitalization mistakes? You have a few, and I'm just OCD about that sort of thing.

2) You have the correct number of paragraphs, but the sentences that you have are too short and in some paragraphs you don't even have enough sentences. Please add more detail! :-)

Fix those things and then post here, and I'll check up on it again.

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[Jasmine ((AKA Jaybird))]

I hope thats better

[Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]]

You're close, but your paragraphs in the appearance and personality still need to be longer. Add a few more sentences and some more detail, please. The amount that you have in the history is about what I'm looking for as the minimum. :-)

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[Jasmine ((AKA Jaybird))]

I really hopes thats better

[Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]]

Accepted!

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