Feedback would be appreciated

[[Ree]craft]

I had a plot idea. A very awesome spiffy cool completely amazing plot idea. It is very precious and I am very much in love with it, but it requires refining and I'd like some feedback for it also.

So....

(chorus of monty python and the holy grail characters): GET ON WITH IT!

I haven't had time to put into a pretty and very ominous heart gripping plot summary paragraph so I'm gonna do it the casual way.

I've got a girl. A normal girl named something like Sue or Jane. Okay, maybe not THAT boring. Anyway she used to be a member of an RPG website. (I know srsly? How profound!). When she went to college she had to quit because she had so much work. When she leaves college for summer break she finds out that this RPG website has turned into an actual facility. What happens there? Well you pretty much go there, create your characters and become your characters. Using BRAND NEW TECHNOLOGY you can become anyone you want for as long as you want. (As long as you pay). What happens in the RPG rooms does not affect your actual body at all. So my main character decides she wants to check it out. She's interested. She goes there and just can't leave cause it's so totally awesome. However she becomes really really obsessed. She doesn't return to college, she forgets her family, and she get wound up in various relationships, male and female, in the real world, and in the RPG world. She begins to stop being able to tell the difference between fiction and reality.

Voila! I'm very proud of this. I got it from a dream. I'm not trying to allude to this site at all The idea started here, but what I'm describing is certainly not what happened to me. If that was the case I'd be long gone.

So what do you think?

[shrimp]

I likes this a lot, Ree. It really does sound pretty interesting.
Can't wait to see what you do with it :D It'd make a pretty cool book^^