Maximus Ultimus District 13

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Name: Maximus Ultimus
Age: 13
Gender: Male
District/Area: District 13
Appearance:

My character has brown hair. He is tall and skinny. Wears District Thirteen uniform. He is Caucasian.

He has green eyes. He has long arms and legs. He is tan. He is very muscular.

Personality:

He is friendly (not in war). He has high confidence in the Rebels. He wants to fight alongside the Rebels and overthrow the Capitol. He is relatively smart.

Some of his flaws are he can be mean. He is not very careful. He is SOMETIMES clumsy.

He cannot be beaten in a realistic fight. He can't ever be given a weapon. He will rampage!!!!!!!!

History:

He lives in an underground apartment. His family is healthy and nice. He is a Lieutenant in the army at age 13.

He was adopted because his real parents abused him. He gets dinner every night because he lives in 13.

He is friends with many people. He is trained with weaponry of all sorts.

Codeword: oda
Comments/Other:

[shrimp]

:[shrimp, eh]:

Hiya^^

Please add more to your paragraphs, for they are very short.

Try adding more information - delve into traits more, opening them up. Is your character jealous? Why are they jealous? What makes them jealous? Things like that.

Also, try not to start the bio with "My character". It's just something that really isn't needed.

What's his height? His weight? His muscles? Any appearance flaws? Try to expand on this.

In addition, it is illogical that he can't be beaten in a realistic fight - he is only 15. It also seems ridiculous to have a 13 year old be a Lieutenant. He would have had to do something so brave and noble that the government had no choice but to give a mere child a position so high in the military.

Your codeword is incorrect, you're missing two letters, after oda. Once the codeword is found, a picture that says codeword correct will appear.

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