Judas Priest -District Six

[Pink Dance Commander]

Name: Judas Halffeild Priest
Age: 15
Gender: Male
District/Area: District 6
Appearance:

Judas is standing at 5'6" and is well built. He is abnormally skinny , in part due to his diet of generally traditional foods. His eyes are a dull hazel, and his jet black hair is well cropped, usually slid back. His wrists and arms seem to fit out of place on him, sucked into his body like fragile sticks. Thus he is somewhat physically fit, mid toned and fair skinned.

He is dressed in a plain black tee shirt and a pair of Woodland camo shorts that are cut off below the knee. He salvaged a MOLLE EMT backpack, black in color, and it hangs off of his shoulders, always on the left side. Topless shoes, and striped blue socks parade his legs.

Personality:

Judas is a all around nice-guy. He has a heart of gold. He is an all-around nice guy, carefree, a flirt, and always touched everyone in a special way to all who he had met. He has often been sort of a klutz, dropping objects for no apparent reason, or forgetting people easily, though sticks to art as hobby His biggest weakness is he has a soft spot for cute woman, a nose for good food, bad weather, and a good time.

History:

Judas is known to be an orphan. His father had left while a dark period of his lifetime. His whereabouts are unknown, as Judas thinks, his father is dead to him. His mother had passed away two years ago by an unknown illness which shared similarities of Cancer. His mother was all he really had in his life. After her passing it has been rather rough, but he keeps his chin up and knows she is in a better place. Judas voted all of his time and space to the work of medical training and artwork, to help find a cure for such diseases, as well as letting the public know about.

His mother's dieing words was a secret that he had a younger sister who attended the hospital as he did, well last time she had heard. His sister's name was Seiri and he may have passed her and doesn't really know what she looks like now.

The only thing he has is a picture of him while she was on his shoulders when they were little and while she was just a little girl. His father had taken her away is what his mother said. His childhood is a blur to him since it was rather dark period of his life time. He hates looking back on it, so he made it a blur to him. So now he currently works as an assistant-nurse.

He is one of the assistant nurses for the past couple years, doing volunteer work at the hospital. Which had gave him quite the reputation among the patients. But he keeps everything to himself and opens up to someone close or a friend of his. He rather be alone most of the time, to escape most of the pressures of the streets. Which in his lone time alone, enjoys drawing and writing. He wonders around the District with a sketchbook most of the time. Often drawing, sketching artwork of the surrounding areas.

He is also a good student at the hospital, remaining in the Junior Nurses. He also has a passion for artwork which he taken up since his father had run off, which he is taught by one of the local patients. Usually trying to draw past memories to get a better idea of them. He often goes to outside to practice along his tutor, drawing different landscapes. He has a soft spot for scenic and peaceful places which he is mostly found at among the tops of buildings.

Judas is now currently looking for traces of his sister who he longs to be reunited since she is only the remaining family he has left..

Codeword: odair
Comments/Other:

[Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]]

Hi. >.>

Click this link.

Please read numbers 1, 3, 4, 11, and 15.

No fangirl mobs. No martial arts. He's not a celebrity and he's living in Panem, so this should be common sense.

Post here when you're done editing.

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[Pink Dance Commander]

Gotcha, fixed I think for the most part! ;D

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I doubt that he would have that specific type of backpack - we don't know what happened to these companies before the creation of Panem, so possibly they were all wiped out. I would simply remove "MOLLE EMT" to make it acceptable - they're allowed to carry backpacks.

It would also be nice to add his weight - but eating traditional foods wouldn't necessarily keep his weight low. Perhaps you mean "organic"? Because when I think of traditional, I think of Italian Spagetti (or the stuff that Giada DeLaurentis makes on her cooking show), or Chinese dim sum, or Indian naan. Things like that are traditional. Traditional foods are essentially foods that are typically served in a certain culture.

Please add more to personality - you need two more paragraphs for his personality. Try adding more personality flaws - right now, he's looking a bit like a Gary-Stu, aka a character with no flaws whatsoever that becomes extremely difficult to RP due to his/her ability to react positively to any situation. Characters are human. They have dreams and fears and things they love and hate. Try putting that into his bio.

For history, he probably subconsciously blocked the memories out, not blocked it out on purpose - change the wording so people don't think he can control his own mind.

His sister's name was Seiri and he may have passed her and doesn't really know what she looks like now.

What does may have passed her mean?

I've also discussed this with another tutor, and we think that there might not be hospitals in 6. There might be family-run apothecary-esque shops, but no "hospital". Please ask another staff member to clarify whether there are hospitals in 6, because I have no clue xP

If not, perhaps he could be studying in the health department of the College, etc.

Just respond once you've made the changes, and we'll take another look at it^^

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