Eva Treman-District 13

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Name: Eva Treman
Age: 14
Gender: Female
District/Area: District 13
Appearance:

She is a skinny girl with gangly legs. She has big feet with stubby toes. On her left foot, she has numerous scars from dropping guns as part of her battle training. She has chubby thighs, which she is very sensitive about. She has a small tummy.

Eva is tall for her age, which can be both an advantage and a disadvantage. She has a big head. Her left earlobe is torn from another insident with a knife. She has fair skin with some scars from battle training. Eva has short, wavy, brown hair, which she hates. She wishes she had straight, long hair. She has blue- grey-green eyes.

Personality:

Eva likes to laugh a lot. Some say she laughs TOO MUCH, making her seem an oddity. In reality, she is a sensible person. But every person has a fatal flaw or two. Her's are gossiping and fighting too much. She is the type of person to believe in ghosts.


Eva is a hard worker, which is important for a citizen of district 13. But you would have to be mad to anger her. Her parents can verify this by their scars from trying to calm her down. Eva is known to daydream at training, once resulting in getting her earlobe chopped off. But she wakes up immediatly once the instructor comes over.



Eva is goofy, and as I said before, she likes to laugh. She is labled as a troublemaker by her nuclear history teachers. Mrs. Waner can tell you all about it. Eva is a warrior at heart. But when you get past that, she is a softy. Eva is sensitive, and she cries a lot.

History:

Eva has a large family, packed into her family's small compartment. She has her 2 brothers, which are named Tanner and Davis. Tanner is 7 years old, and pulls pranks on their family. Davis is 3, and is in a wheelchair after getting his leg broken. Her sister is 2 years old, and is a cutie, but she is crabby.




Her parents are Maria and Amadar Treman. Her cousin is in their house, and her name is Rocky. She is age 5. Eva was brought into the world on February 16rd. She goes to her nuclear history class in the heart of district 13. She does not have any friends. This is due to her unfriendliness. She is like an outsider.


Eva started working as a soldier at 14 years old. Other soldiers did not talk to her. When Eva was 11, she tore her earlobe when she fell asleep on the job. Once or twice, Eva had fights with other soldiers, but they were over pretty quickly. Eva likes one soldier very much.

Codeword: odair
Comments/Other:

[gxk]

Alright, so you have a start. But this is just really short, I know little to nothing about your character as a person.

This unfortunately has the same issues as your other character bio. Instead of repeating what Luna and Shrimp said you need to fix on your other bio, I'm going to suggest you go reread what they said carefully. Look at the Bio making guides and checklist we have.

I really just need a lot more before I can accept. If you have any specific questions, feel free to ask me.

Just keep going, bios can be hard. It takes lots of patience and practice to get good at them. You'll there, try not to get frustrated. It's not easy, sometimes you just have to work at it. ^^

Post here when you have made changes. Another staff or myself will then take another look.