Mylies Falkwreath Wanderer

[mylies]

Name: Mylies Falkwreath
Age: 14
Gender: Male
District/Area: Wanderer
Appearance:

Serin has a tall skinny build with a height of 5'7 and a weight of 115. He has grey eyes that seem to pirece through you. His hair is a dirty blond that is constantly dirty and messed up, giving him the bedhead look. His hair goes down about half a inch done his forehead. On his face he has a long red scar that goes from the right side of his right eye to the left side of his mouth. The scar is a deep red but when Mylies is angry it pulse a birght red giving it a creepy look.

Serin wears an old faded blue jacket with the words born to run barely readable trough the mud and dirt.. He has normal blue jeans that are extremely faded at the knees and the cuffs at the bottom riped. Mylies wears an regular watch with an metal strap and a blue face. He has a long burn mark on his arm that goes from his should to his hand, where it turns into several tendrils. His legs are long lean and slightly muscular.

Personality:

Mylies is a talkative person with a bad habit to over trust people. He'll be skeptical of them at first and then after around sevral days or so start trusting them in the highest regards. Most of the time because he is so talkative he comes across as annoying. Also because he is so talkative he hates being alone in the woods, so to solve this problem he stole a small staute of a barn owl posed in mid flight he stole.

Although he may trust many he will rarely trust peacekeepers and people from the capitol as they have to know him for a very long times, sometimes a year, before he starts trusting them. He's highly protective of any allys and rarely breaks a promise, and that is if it puts many people at great risk. For example he would attempt to break a friend out of prison. Although he is willing to do some things without thought, one thing he will never to without thought is kill humans. If he ever has to attack someone he always hits them so that they collaspe and can no longer give chase, like in the knee.

Mylies is also hyper. He's constantly running around and climbing trees, but when theres danger he can be still as a rock. But thats a 50/50 chance. More likely then not he'll twicth or something like that and will be spotted. In which case him being hyper helps with that it allows him to run quickly skillfully avioding roots and rocks.

History:

Mylies was born the youngest in family of six in district 7, which included his mom,dad, and two sisters. When he was eight his mother died in a accident at work in which he was killed. Shortly after that his mother was raped and killed while peacekeepers gave it a blind eye, giving him the loathing of peacekeepers which he caries to this day. Even after the peacekeepers claim that they didnt see anything he refused to belief them.

After that his sisters tookcare of him and the rest. Only one sister could work and there fore they had to learn to hunt. Mylies other three sisters refused to go and hunt but Mylies wasn't as afraid. He found a older man than could no longer harvest lumber in the forest due to injury how to teach him to hunt. His other learned how to sew,cook, and clean well and was soon doing this for money. Even though it didnt net a lot of profits it gave them just enough to stay alive.

After a while he got quite well at hunting and just in time too, as the man was taken to jail after killing a peacekeeper as he tried to take him in for questioning. After several more years, when Mylies was 12 ,his last sister left him to live by herself. He tryed to live in the community home but didn't quite find it home. It was too strict and sad. They also did not allow him to leave, making him stay inside. Then at 13 he ran away into the forest. He quickly loved it and now lives quite happily in the forest walking pointlessly around.

Codeword: odair
Comments/Other:

[gxk]

Hey there,

For a paragraph to truly be a paragraph it should be at least 5 sentences long. You have some that are shorter than this that I would like you to add to. Please be as descriptive as you can in all areas. Right now I'm not getting a great sense of who your character is. I want you to elaborate more on what you have and then weave in new details as well.

Post here when you've made changes.

~gxk

[mylies]

fixed

[Lulu]

Hi! There are still definitely a lot more things you can expand upon. For instance, who is this older man who teaches him how to hunt? Please describe that a bit more; that part confuses me. Just find a few more places to describe more and tell us more about your character, and he'll be accepted^^

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[mylies]

Alright I added some details.

[Baby Wessex d9b [earthling]]

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[mylies]

would that go under history?

[Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]]

Yup, it would.

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