Arbore District 11

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Name: Arbore
Age: 12
Gender: Female
District/Area: District 11
Appearance:

Arbore is tall for her age, 54 inches, and weighs 80 pounds. She has jet black hair, brown eyes, and pale skin. The clothes she wears are tomboyish clothes, usually shorts and a T-shirt. She is not too fat and also not too skinny. She wears her hair in a single braid.
Arbore is a quick runner and good climber, even though she is tall, and can lift up to 25 pounds. She can tie knots well with her small hands. She has just enough money to buy enough food for her family, but she weakens at the mere thought of buying flowers to put into her hair.

Personality:

Arbore loves flowers, but she is mostly a tomboy. She only hang out with boys, and has never had a crush on any of them. The only people she really loves is her brother, her two sisters, and her parents. She is pessimistic until it comes to her friends, she encourages them to be what they want to be.
When Arbore gets angry, she just sulks around and does nothing until someone cheers her up, usually one of her siblings or her mother. She is talkative around boys, and when she is forced to be with girls, she just keeps to herself. Arbore is the center of many boy's world, even though she doesn't know it. She thinks that she is ugly, but in reality she is really quite beautiful. Often times Her beauty lets her get her way.
When she sees a child left alone in the streets she gives them some food, if she has any with her. She has nothing against girls, she just prefers to be with boys. Many of the girls do not like Arbore because they think that she is taking all of the boys.

History:

Arbore was born in a normal family home, already filled with a girl and two boys who fought almost every day. She had a relatively normal life until one day, when she was 10, as she was walking to school with only one of her brothers, Relinquit, and someone snuck up on them.
Relinquit was the first one to notice that there was someone stalking them. He turned around quickly, but the stalker was nowhere to be found. That was the first time they ever were stalked. It happened day, after day, but they didn't think much of it. One day, when they decided that it was too much too take, the whole family walked them to school. That was the the time the stalker decided to strike. The stalker went right to Relinquent, jumped on his back, and the stalker was so heavy that Relinquent fell, and the stalker and Relinquent, were never seen again.
That was almost the end for Abore, but her sister, Ventus, and her remaning brother, pulled her up from her dreary days. She went to school and made even more friends and found found her best friend, Agglomero.

Codeword: oDair
Comments/Other:

[L△LIA]

Hi! You'll need to expand on this just a bit more before we can accept it. You have the correct number of paragraphs for each of your sections (although I would appreciate it if you could put a full line break between each one, like in this post), but many of them are quite short. A solid paragraph should be at least five sentences.

Also, she needs a flaw or two, particularly in her appearance. What makes her feel self-conscious about herself? What does she wish she could change?

As for her history, it'd be nice if there were more information about her, seeing as most of it is actually about her brother. More than just that one event must have happened in her life — it doesn't have to be anything dramatic or over the top, it can be little things. Did she have difficulty making friends in school or was that easy for her? How are her grades? What does she think about her everyday life in District 11? What does she do for fun? How about telling us just a little about the people in her life and the way she relates to them? And so on.

Post here when you've edited and one of us will take another look! ^^