My FanFiction (WIP)
Aug 23, 2012 16:27:51 GMT -5
Post by Dan(AKA Scar) on Aug 23, 2012 16:27:51 GMT -5
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• Reaping
a. Prim nearly bleeds to death getting finger pricked
i. Wearing a white dress like sacrificial lamb
ii. Passes out, hits ground. People laugh
iii. Gets picked
iv. Katniss carries her to the stage
v. Dramatic music in Kat’s head (perhaps beautiful tragedy)
vi. Effie says something snarky
b. Gale, who won the year before, gets picked
i. Stumbling around on stage
ii. Name called (name left in bowl from year before)
iii. Drunkenly falls from his chair
iv. Effie, not sure of what to do, says the bowl has spoken, then kicks at prim to see if she’s alive
• Justice Building farewell
a. Prim
i. Remains unconscious until at least the train, doesn’t wake in the room
ii. Katniss mutters she’ll be dead in 5
b. Gale
i. Peeta walks out of Gale’s room with clothes in hand, just wearing underwear
ii. Kat walks in Gale’s room, sees him in just underwear as well with clothes in the corner
iii. Gale drinking juice box because they won’t supply alcohol
iv. Babbles in French accent
v. Kat walks up, slaps him, says he’ll be dead in 2
• Other reaping notes?
i. The careers look more careery than usual, Mckayla is not impressed ("As for the Careers? Mckayla is not impressed. She has battled kittens with more fight in them, or so she says. Maybe that's what made her lose that finger. I never had the nerve to ask with that look she wears.")
ii. Peeta loves Glimmer’s shoes
iii. Misses some (3-6, 9&10)to make a sandwich for Peeta, who calls her back for some
iv. Peeta screams to Kat “The ginger from 5 can never win”
v. 7 look terrified because they have to be near Johanna
vi. Peeta pauses on 11 because the guys are called first in odd districts and he wanted to look at the sexy legs of Thresh
vii. Thresh has freakishly toned & long legs
viii. Rue in all black flits onto the stage unseen by the escort who called her name
• Tribute parade
i. Prim and Gale covered in coal dust for outfits
ii. Prim, never seeing a naked man before, grabs on thinking it steers the chariot
iii. Gale had found alcohol in the capitol somewhere.
iv. As the chariot passes a torch lining the avenue, the two are ablaze
v. Thankfully, Gale is drunk and falls from the chariot, bringing Prim with him
vi. Angry prim wrestles him, rolling on the ground back and forth, extinguishing the flames burly
• Training
a. Gale disappears during day one of training
b. Announced that he may need to be replaced
c. Strange blinking tree in the camouflage station
d. Prim begins knife throwing in private session (aired only because of the incident with gale since finding him was a big deal, and that is the only part), hitting the “tree” behind her with a knife in the groin
e. He is dragged away by the medics who can’t wake him. He ate from the plant station and ran across marijuana (find fun slang name to use like locoweed), doesn’t get score
f. Prim gets a 5, which Kat questions desperately. (Perhaps because she inadvertently saved Gale)
• Interviews
a. Glimmer admits a love of dance
b. Rue goes all ninja and summons mockingjays to carry her away
c. Foxface sings and does a sexy dance on piano
d. The 8 girl (Lyra and Trorry or Kaida and Kegan) kills herself over Gale’s stripshow, afraid to have to ever face her parents again after her virgin eyes witnessed that
e. Gale appears again, strips down to underwear for the 3 minute interview (Peeta gets nose bleed)
• Games (Day 1)
a. Glimmer pirouettes off the platform early, takes a backpack and weapon of choice, and blows up the male twin
b. When the gong sounds, Thresh skips to the field with nothing, frolicking over the weapons and backpacks
c. Prim gets to a stray knife, picks it up, and stumbles, slicing her leg open
d. Gale grabs her, carries her to the woods, whips out a needle and thread, and sews her up. The camera reveals the stitching to be a perfect mockingjay
e. Gale runs into the trees, last he is seen
f. Bloodbath details
g. Marvel, Cato, and Clove party it up
h. Thresh dances to anthem
• Day 2
a. Prim kills Cato after he had a hard night of celebrating achieving his one goal in life, to make it to the games, and passed out
b. That ginger finds a cave leading to castle underground and is followed from the river by 2 men in bushes with a camera and boom mic
c. Love triangle soap (the desperate and the delirious) with rowan, breventide, and lyra
• Day 3
a. Prim kills angus, the incredibly tiny boy for a name like that, by falling onto him from a tree
b. The ginger escapes the castle with the help of gingers that get her out of the arena
c. Stryker kills rowan to get the girls after the anthem, not seen until next night in reports
i. Peeta cries
• Day 4
a. Draco kills Marvel with a spell
b. Draco dies when Rue shoves him, saying Ninja always beats wizard. Before death whispers my fatha will hear about this. (day 4)
c. Thresh doesn’t die, gets taken away to sign a performance contract during the games
d. Melodux traumatized by Rowan’s death when she sees it in the daily report
i. Mopes by tree
• Day 5
a. Rue goes ninja, conquers Gamemakers studio with help of her mockingjays, then can’t be bothered by the weaklings
b. Melodux gives long monologue before clove kills her for “killing” cato, her man
c. Breventide and Lyra kill each other as relief from stryker
• Day 6
a. Clove dies when the bloodbath zombies rise up and kill her
b. Stryker dies of a broken heart
c. Prim is announced the winner by default
d. Gale falls from a tree and wakes up. Was presumed dead because his tracker didn’t work
e. Both get to win
Character list (in order of death)
Pre-games
8g) Kaida- Kills herself during interview because of the shame she felt watching him strip, couldn’t bear to face her family
Day 1
1g) Glimmer- Jumps off platform early, pirouetting off, runs to get weapons and backpacks, and hits 8b’s mine, blowing him up at the gong
8b) Kegan- Glimmer kills by blowing up his mines before the gong rings
5b) Garrick- Bloodbath
9b) Tonberry- Bloodbath
7g) Siobhan- Bloodbath
3g) Adara- Bloodbath
6b) Trorry- Bloodbath
9g) Autumn- Bloodbath
Day 2
2b) Cato (Katniss calls Dillard) - Prim kills day 2 while he’s passed out after wild night partying
Day 3
4b) Rowan- Killed by stryker in the love triangle
10b) Angus- Prim falls on from tree while building a fire
5g) That ginger (Taegan- irish for little poet)- finds a cave underground that leads to an underground castle that is filled with gingers that help her escape the arena
Day 4
1b) Marvel- Draco kills with a “spell”
3b) Draco- Killed by Rue when she shoves him, saying ninja always beats wizard, and he falls on his ‘wand’
11b) Thresh- goes to the field frolicking away. Gets picked up for a performance contract day 3
Day 5
11g) Rue- ninja that doesn’t die, conquers gamemaker studio then leaves
10g) Melodux- Killed by Clove after long monologue for killing Cato, who was her man
4g) Breventide- killed by Lyra as a favor to escape stryker
6g) Lyra- killed by Breventide as a favor to escape stryker
Day 6
2g) Clove (Kat calls Basil) - bloodbath zombies rise from the lake and attack her
7b) Stryker- dies of broken heart
Winners
12b) Gale- Hides in tree and is presumed dead because his tracker from the previous year doesn’t work
12g) Prim- announced the winner, then Gale appears, so they both win
• Reaping
a. Prim nearly bleeds to death getting finger pricked
i. Wearing a white dress like sacrificial lamb
ii. Passes out, hits ground. People laugh
iii. Gets picked
iv. Katniss carries her to the stage
v. Dramatic music in Kat’s head (perhaps beautiful tragedy)
vi. Effie says something snarky
b. Gale, who won the year before, gets picked
i. Stumbling around on stage
ii. Name called (name left in bowl from year before)
iii. Drunkenly falls from his chair
iv. Effie, not sure of what to do, says the bowl has spoken, then kicks at prim to see if she’s alive
• Justice Building farewell
a. Prim
i. Remains unconscious until at least the train, doesn’t wake in the room
ii. Katniss mutters she’ll be dead in 5
b. Gale
i. Peeta walks out of Gale’s room with clothes in hand, just wearing underwear
ii. Kat walks in Gale’s room, sees him in just underwear as well with clothes in the corner
iii. Gale drinking juice box because they won’t supply alcohol
iv. Babbles in French accent
v. Kat walks up, slaps him, says he’ll be dead in 2
• Other reaping notes?
i. The careers look more careery than usual, Mckayla is not impressed ("As for the Careers? Mckayla is not impressed. She has battled kittens with more fight in them, or so she says. Maybe that's what made her lose that finger. I never had the nerve to ask with that look she wears.")
ii. Peeta loves Glimmer’s shoes
iii. Misses some (3-6, 9&10)to make a sandwich for Peeta, who calls her back for some
iv. Peeta screams to Kat “The ginger from 5 can never win”
v. 7 look terrified because they have to be near Johanna
vi. Peeta pauses on 11 because the guys are called first in odd districts and he wanted to look at the sexy legs of Thresh
vii. Thresh has freakishly toned & long legs
viii. Rue in all black flits onto the stage unseen by the escort who called her name
• Tribute parade
i. Prim and Gale covered in coal dust for outfits
ii. Prim, never seeing a naked man before, grabs on thinking it steers the chariot
iii. Gale had found alcohol in the capitol somewhere.
iv. As the chariot passes a torch lining the avenue, the two are ablaze
v. Thankfully, Gale is drunk and falls from the chariot, bringing Prim with him
vi. Angry prim wrestles him, rolling on the ground back and forth, extinguishing the flames burly
• Training
a. Gale disappears during day one of training
b. Announced that he may need to be replaced
c. Strange blinking tree in the camouflage station
d. Prim begins knife throwing in private session (aired only because of the incident with gale since finding him was a big deal, and that is the only part), hitting the “tree” behind her with a knife in the groin
e. He is dragged away by the medics who can’t wake him. He ate from the plant station and ran across marijuana (find fun slang name to use like locoweed), doesn’t get score
f. Prim gets a 5, which Kat questions desperately. (Perhaps because she inadvertently saved Gale)
• Interviews
a. Glimmer admits a love of dance
b. Rue goes all ninja and summons mockingjays to carry her away
c. Foxface sings and does a sexy dance on piano
d. The 8 girl (Lyra and Trorry or Kaida and Kegan) kills herself over Gale’s stripshow, afraid to have to ever face her parents again after her virgin eyes witnessed that
e. Gale appears again, strips down to underwear for the 3 minute interview (Peeta gets nose bleed)
• Games (Day 1)
a. Glimmer pirouettes off the platform early, takes a backpack and weapon of choice, and blows up the male twin
b. When the gong sounds, Thresh skips to the field with nothing, frolicking over the weapons and backpacks
c. Prim gets to a stray knife, picks it up, and stumbles, slicing her leg open
d. Gale grabs her, carries her to the woods, whips out a needle and thread, and sews her up. The camera reveals the stitching to be a perfect mockingjay
e. Gale runs into the trees, last he is seen
f. Bloodbath details
g. Marvel, Cato, and Clove party it up
h. Thresh dances to anthem
• Day 2
a. Prim kills Cato after he had a hard night of celebrating achieving his one goal in life, to make it to the games, and passed out
b. That ginger finds a cave leading to castle underground and is followed from the river by 2 men in bushes with a camera and boom mic
c. Love triangle soap (the desperate and the delirious) with rowan, breventide, and lyra
• Day 3
a. Prim kills angus, the incredibly tiny boy for a name like that, by falling onto him from a tree
b. The ginger escapes the castle with the help of gingers that get her out of the arena
c. Stryker kills rowan to get the girls after the anthem, not seen until next night in reports
i. Peeta cries
• Day 4
a. Draco kills Marvel with a spell
b. Draco dies when Rue shoves him, saying Ninja always beats wizard. Before death whispers my fatha will hear about this. (day 4)
c. Thresh doesn’t die, gets taken away to sign a performance contract during the games
d. Melodux traumatized by Rowan’s death when she sees it in the daily report
i. Mopes by tree
• Day 5
a. Rue goes ninja, conquers Gamemakers studio with help of her mockingjays, then can’t be bothered by the weaklings
b. Melodux gives long monologue before clove kills her for “killing” cato, her man
c. Breventide and Lyra kill each other as relief from stryker
• Day 6
a. Clove dies when the bloodbath zombies rise up and kill her
b. Stryker dies of a broken heart
c. Prim is announced the winner by default
d. Gale falls from a tree and wakes up. Was presumed dead because his tracker didn’t work
e. Both get to win
Character list (in order of death)
Pre-games
8g) Kaida- Kills herself during interview because of the shame she felt watching him strip, couldn’t bear to face her family
Day 1
1g) Glimmer- Jumps off platform early, pirouetting off, runs to get weapons and backpacks, and hits 8b’s mine, blowing him up at the gong
8b) Kegan- Glimmer kills by blowing up his mines before the gong rings
5b) Garrick- Bloodbath
9b) Tonberry- Bloodbath
7g) Siobhan- Bloodbath
3g) Adara- Bloodbath
6b) Trorry- Bloodbath
9g) Autumn- Bloodbath
Day 2
2b) Cato (Katniss calls Dillard) - Prim kills day 2 while he’s passed out after wild night partying
Day 3
4b) Rowan- Killed by stryker in the love triangle
10b) Angus- Prim falls on from tree while building a fire
5g) That ginger (Taegan- irish for little poet)- finds a cave underground that leads to an underground castle that is filled with gingers that help her escape the arena
Day 4
1b) Marvel- Draco kills with a “spell”
3b) Draco- Killed by Rue when she shoves him, saying ninja always beats wizard, and he falls on his ‘wand’
11b) Thresh- goes to the field frolicking away. Gets picked up for a performance contract day 3
Day 5
11g) Rue- ninja that doesn’t die, conquers gamemaker studio then leaves
10g) Melodux- Killed by Clove after long monologue for killing Cato, who was her man
4g) Breventide- killed by Lyra as a favor to escape stryker
6g) Lyra- killed by Breventide as a favor to escape stryker
Day 6
2g) Clove (Kat calls Basil) - bloodbath zombies rise from the lake and attack her
7b) Stryker- dies of broken heart
Winners
12b) Gale- Hides in tree and is presumed dead because his tracker from the previous year doesn’t work
12g) Prim- announced the winner, then Gale appears, so they both win
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