Callalily's Stories
May 25, 2013 14:40:06 GMT -5
Post by Calla Lily on May 25, 2013 14:40:06 GMT -5
Just some of my little blurbs from stories I'm writing that I'd like some opinions on, thank you. :)
[/sub][/center]Story #1 - Name TBD
*About a girl who hates a boy at school, he ends up liking her
I roll my eyes in annoyance and cross my legs. I try my very best to ignore this boy, he was a pretty stupid kid. I didn't just go around saying this kind of stuff about everyone. But this boy had managed to fail art- and how could anyone manage that? He'd come close to failing Spanish once too, passing only with a 67 average. He'd left his online grades logged in at one of the school's library computers once, so I may have check out some of his grades.
Boy, was that kid a mess.
AS of right now, he was leaning back on his chair so he only balance on the back two legs, and held the rest of his weight by gripping the table. He was joking with one of his friends about something, but I was pay attention to what. "Hey, Caitlin!" He says to me. "Mike, don't talk me." I respond, not even looking at him. He sat directly across from me, but me head was down as I wrote down some notes.
"C'mon Cait!" He said. I'm not sure when he thought it was okay to call me Cait. I look up and sigh, obviously annoyed. "What?" I snap. He's about to say something. Wouldn't it be funny if...
BAM!
He looses his grip on the table and his chair falls backwards. Everyone's head snaps to look at him. He gets up and picks up his chair, his face red in embarrassment. His friend chuckles. "You okay man?" Mike smiles, kinda laughing about the situation. "Yea," he says with a nod.
The bell rings and the class packs up, leaving behind the classroom. There are still some murmurs about Mike's fall, and I have to say I'm proud of myself for not bursting out in hysterical laughter.
To be continued....
So, how do you like it guys? I'll add more in terms of details and paragraphs later. :)
