Blood, splattered everywhere (mylies, open)

[Funny Man]

Looking very unhappy, as usual, Raiku found himself in a strange new place. A strange place he had never seen before. A strange place called district 9. Raiku hadn't been outside for weeks, things do change fast. More factories than hunting grounds, this is a strungle for survivle itself! Raiku was sad, hungery, and (amazingly) lonely. He had an empty feeling inside. Not the empty feeling you get in your stomach when you've been sleeping for weeks, but the feeling that you need someone. Raiku always had that feeling. Looking around he could see the white-ness of the snow intested. Squinting, Raiku took his first step into the new world.
"Damn assholes, they took away everything! Total b.s.!" Raiku said to himself. He had to do something aboutt this. Complain?`No, to whimpy. He needed something anonomous, something with a little "pazaz" to it.

Raiku thought in silence. Kill a man? Mabey later. I need soething... someone.....

[Mylies43]

Mylies hide his bow in a log and went under the fence. He kept his dagger hidden in his pocket. He thought he would never come
Here again, but here he is. District nine. He walked down the empty street to the district square. He then walked to the far side. He then climbed on top of the nearest house and walked across the roof. He walked backnto the district square by jumping across the roof tops.

He then jumped down into a alley. He climbed out to another steert and saw another boy. He froze. He knew that look. He slowly started backing off.

[Funny Man]

Raiku stopped breathing for a moment. He knew another person stood in his presence. Raiku looked at the near rooftops in search for the stranger. Nothing. He kept walking though. The intruder wasn't getting off that easy.

Raiku openned his coat poket and pulled out his knife. He knew they would atack. Raiku walked outwards toward the center of the district. He saw a small cloud of gas warming the chilled air. There they are, Raiku silently sprinted arcoss the way. Finding himself on the other side of the square. Still foucussing on the breeathe, Raiku sprinted again in that direction. As he aproched the area, only a message was left in the ground. It said, "nice try! "

[Mylies43]

Mylies eyes went wide. He knew that the boy saw him. He wished he had his dagger. Then the boy said nice try.
He sliemtly groaned. He saw him too. There was nothing left to do. Bee trimmed around and climbed back onto the rooftops hoping to out run Jim and get his weapons.

[Funny Man]

Running? Come on, Raiku hates running. But, he's gotta do what he's gotta do...

Raiku sprinted, eyes following the boy on the rooftops. He ran beside a house into their back yard. He jumped a fence. On to the next yard. Raiku stopped, letting the boy get his distance. He had a plan.
Raiku climbed the side of a house. Looking straight ahaid was the boy. He sprinted, yes atop the house. Jump. Sprint... Jump. Sprint... He kept repeating this pattern jumping from house to house. He started getting closer to the boy. Raiku had trained himself for hunting. Now there wasn't any hunting grounds. What would he hunt now? Well the boy. Raiku didn't like this boy. Running after a long weeks sleep.
Oh, would you look at that! Raiku was only two houses back from the boy. And still gaining speed...

[Mylies43]

Mylies was jumping across the roof tops at full speed when he looked behind him. The boy was catching up. He was so close and gaining. Mylies thought fast racking his Brian for any way out of this mess. He could call. For peacekeepers but then they might arrest him too. He looked behind him again. He was closer. Suddenly he stubbed his toe and flew forward. He turned around see the boy was closing the distance he got and kept running. When he was at the edge of a roof he quickly turned stuck out his leg and tripped the boy.eGe then kept running toward the hole in fence to arm him self. But to do this hE had to get off the roofs. He jumped down and ran toward the fence.

[Funny Man]

Raiku tripped and watched the boy crawl through the fence. "Shit! Get over here!!!" Raiku screamed. "Don't turn your back on me I wont be ignored!" Raiku jumped up running towards the fence. He hopped off the house, crupled his leg under his weight, but still kept going.

[Mylies43]

Mylies got under the fence and relaxed a little. Then he heard the boy yelling at him about getting back there. He smirked and reined around. Almost all the color had drained out of his face. A peacekeeper just rounded the corner. He snapped back to attention by dhakung his head. The bit was not so
Important any more. He ran to the log where he hid his bow and arrows and shot. His arm was a little off though. He got the peacekeepers arm nit the head or chest. He made a quick decision and ran to the boy. He graves and ran deeper into the forest.

[Funny Man]

Raiku stopped at the fence. What was he doing? Raiku asked himself. He looked through the fence only to see the boy running with weapons and a peacekeeper.
Raiku climbed through the fence and atacked the peacekeeper. Left arm, broken. Eight ribs, cracked. Neck, snapped. Raiku killed the peacekeeper. He kept running, though, through the forest. At first he couldn't tell what he was seeing. The boy. He knew now.
Raiku sprinted at full speed. I will get him and I will kill him! Raiku ran leaving deep footprints. He hopped on the side of a tree, jumped off, and rolled only to get further. The boy, now only a hundred meters away. Raiku can run six-hundred.

[Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]]

Mylies, please stop posting. You may not start RPing until you have a character accepted.

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[Mylies43]

(then accept him )
Mylies ran through the forest at full speed. He look behind him and saw the bow cacthing up. He silently swore at him before making a plan. He looked around and saw nothing but trees. Trees! Of course why didn't he think about it earlier. He quickly turned and jumped onto a tree. He climbed up quickly and aimed his bow at his head. don't move or I'll shoot.

[WT]

Mylies... I know you have the code correct in your character, but seriously, have you even read the rules? o.O

Article III. Characters

ii. All characters must be accepted by a staff member before they may be used.
v. Characters must adhere to the length requirement: two paragraphs are expected for appearance, three for personality, and three for history.
vii. Do not argue with the staff member who is reviewing your bio. Being courteous and making the changes they ask is the quickest way to get your character accepted most quickly.

Article IV. Roleplaying

i. Roleplaying with characters who have not been accepted is prohibited.

You've blatantly ignored III.ii and IV.i in multiple threads. Moreover, telling Thundy to accept your character despite the fact that doing so flouts III.vii - and despite the fact that the character doesn't meet the baseline requirements in III.vi - is not only out of line in terms of the rules but is also incredibly presumptuous, obnoxious, and all-around rude.

I know you're new, and I have no doubt that you're capable of being an all-around nice and proficient person. However, that kind of rudeness combined with your brazen rule-breaking is making you come across as incompetent and coarse. Please, for the love of all things good, revamp your character a bit as you were originally asked instead of just jumping off to RP and thinking that no one would notice you flouting the rules right and left. It makes things a lot easier on everyone involved, and will make all our future interactions of any sort much smoother.

An apology to Thundy also wouldn't be a bad idea. Which means, "Do it, because she deserves it." By no means am I trying to discourage things like asking why she asked you to do certain things with your character, or explaining why you feel that a certain factor should be left alone, but it's important to handle things like that politely. Just saying "then accept him" is way out of line.

Thank you. Good day, and good luck with the rest of your time here!

[Mylies43]

When I wrote that is that my character has been fixed. I wasn't trying to be rude