Hailie Talez, District 2

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Name: Hailie Talez
Age: 15
Gender: Female
District/Area: District 2
Appearance:

Hailie is a girl with straight, armpit length black hair and black eyes. She is 5'6'' and 115 lbs. People call her a nerd because she wears big glasses and nerd-like clothing. Hailie is actually pretty, if you look beyond her glasses and outfit. Her shirts are usually collared grey or tan, and she wears long khaki pants. Unlike many nerds, her skin is relatively free of acne.

Hailie runs very fast but is otherwise not very athletic or strong. Hey muscles are very weak due to the fact that she prefers math over exercise. She dislikes almost every sport, except for the ones that require little or no energy. Hailie hates clothing and makeup, and has no concern on uneven skin or lips. Because of this, she usually dresses simple to make her look as non-girly as possible.

Personality:

Hailie is a quiet person who would rather be called a nerd than a "popular girl". At home, she gets whatever she wants as long as she stays quiet and behaves. This has resulted in her learning to keep her emotions bottled up. She is the ultimate nerd, achieving straight As and being the teacher's pet. Sometimes she knows the answers to questions even the teachers can't answer.

People try to bully Hailie but she acts like she doesn't care, which has resulted in the bullies losing interest of her as a victim. Hailie has a few nerd friends like her, but she usually stays by herself than with friends. She is not a social person and does not like to work with other people. Hailie is very independent and strives to achieve things alone without help.

Hailie is not very trustworthy and usually betrays people easily. She is very standoffish and is a ”blah". Hailie does not care much about other peoples' problems and emotions, only her own's. She studies for most of her free time, but also attends her district's training program. Her best weapon is the throwing knife, as it does not use too much energy.

History:

Hailie was born on May 5th, and her older brother, Whyhan, was born three years earlier. When Hailie was a toddler, her hometown was struck by an earthquake which killed many of her friends and caused Whyhan to lose his arm. People often treat Hailie unfairly, but she has grown used to it. Since people almost never stand up for her, she has developed the skill to avoid bullies and blend in, even with her nerdy appearance.

Obviously, Hailie must be very smart to earn the title "nerd" at her school. She has never gotten any grade below A- in her entire life. She has been bullied as a child, but people have lost interest in bulling her due to her ability to look like she couldn't care less. She is favored by all of the teachers except for the Phys Ed teacher, who despises her.

Hailie has an incredible talent in drawing, and has been featured on her school's paper for her notable drawing skills. She also loves painting. When Hailie came home after winning a drawing competition, she found a silver watch on the ground. She has worn it ever since to remind herself of that day.

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Comments/Other:

[cass]

Hey there, DragonMew ^^

You have a great start to a character going here. But you are going to need to beef up the paragraphs you already have! So you are going to need the minimum requirements of two paragraphs for appearance, three for personality and three for history. I paragraph consists of a minimum five sentences and most of the paragraphs you have here are two or three. So try expanding on what you have and adding more detail so that we get a better picture and understanding of what your character is like.

So once you have edited reply back here and someone will check ^^

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Edited!

[cass]

Much better! Great job.