Kylie Candor District 4

[johanna7]

Name: Kylie Candor
Age: 15
Gender: Female
District/Area: District 4
Appearance:

She is a very graceful character, she has light skin with a little color, she is always glowing , her appearance is almost perfectly symmetrical so she is very attractive, her hair is dark brown and flows down her back if it is not tied up neatly. Her bright blue eyes shine as bright as the sun.She has a few freckles that she covers up with her make up most of the time.

She is thin but physically fit , she has a very nice swimmers body , she is not very tall but she is not tiny either , probably around 5"4. People tend to underestimate her because of how small she is , but she is easily strong enough to prove them wrong and she has the muscles to prove it. She has many ear piercings up along her ear , people do not always like these so she tends to hang her hair down to cover them.

Personality:

Kylie is a strong willed character , she is very strong because she spends most of her time swimming with her friends from District 4. This means she is very fit and excels in races and at swimming.She has often beat even adults in swimming races and her family often tell her she was adopted from a family of mermaids. That story always made her laugh because she knew it was completeley untrue.Being in the water always made her so happy , she called it her bliss and if she could , she wouldn't get out of the lake ever, but she had other responsibilities which she never got around to because she is very lazy when it come to working.

She is a very loving and kind person towards her group of friends but she finds it hard to make new friends and to trust new people, which is a source of sadness in her life.She can be very hot headed when people get on her nerves and she is known to do terrible things on the spur of the moment.

She is a very smart girl and she is known to make good quick decisions and she know when to do things.She also has a very good knowledge of plants and berries and fish.She has experience with hunting as from when she was young , her father would take herself and her siblings to hunt , and she could catch and kill fish using only her hands.So that means she was very good with different types of weapons, especially knives.She could throw a knife across a field and still hit the smallest rabbit.

History:

Kylie was born in District four as a middle child.She had loving parents all through out her childhood and has two older siblings , brother and sister and she has two younger brothers and one younger sister.

She spent her childhood watching her family who worked in the docks , fishing as that is what the most poeople do in district 4 , and thats when she learned she loved to swim.

For the rest of her childhood into her teenage years she swam down in the lakes with her friends and siblings.

School was always a good place for Kylie because she loved to learn , she never had too many friends but her goodlooks and intelligence sent boys up to her non stop but she never found an interest in most of them.

She just continued swimming her life away with her small group of friends. Every year she watched The Hunger Games on her TV with her family , she tought it was cruel but a small part of her wanted to be part of it when she was older.

One time when a boy tried to steal a fish she caught , she grabbed him by the hair and slapped him with the fish before shoving him into the lake , this is when she realized she was violent and hot headed.

Besides those minor setbacks she had a pretty laid back and happy childhood.

Codeword: oDair
Comments/Other:

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Hello Johanna and welcome to the site! There are a few things that need to be fixed in Kylie's app before she gets accepted --

1. We require at least two paragraphs of five sentences each for her Appearance section so I'd love if you could elaborate on her appearance such as what she likes to wear or any more distinguishable physical features.
2. Please check through the grammar and spelling in her application again.
3. Hilary Duff is already taken as a Face Claim so please choose another play-by.

Thanks and reply when she's ready!

Saph

[johanna7]

i edited it , but i could not change the picture so the person i want to make my face claim is Kylie Jenner and i will make a new thread with the picture if you need me to.

[cass]

Hi there Johanna, I'm Cass ^^

Thank you for adding more to your appearance section! It is lovely now! However, there are a few more little things to go! Don't worry though, you are almost there (:

First off, could you please just add a little bit more to your personality? Right now it looks as though you have five sentences when you need to have about fifteen (which means three paragraphs with five sentences in each, as the minimum requirements)!

Saph already picked this out, but you have missed a few! You need to check the grammar and punctuation, a lot of your sentences aren't starting with a capital letter. And then there are the sentences where you have placed a comma and used a capital letter where you shouldn't have!

Could you please make these changes and when you are done reply back here again! You are almost there! Great job so far, Johanna ^^

Also with the photo problem you have there, don't worry! When you use attachments they are unfortunately stuck there! Just make sure you don't use Hillary in posts. If you want to add a photo to your bio use the this code: [*img]URL OF IMAGE GOES HERE[/img*] except get rid of the *.

[johanna7]

modified , i'm really sorry about my spelling and grammar , i'm one of those people who when they look over there work , it's easy for them to miss the same mistakes so if there is more i havn't found , don't hesitate to tell me.

[cass]

Well done! A beautiful first character, just make sure you keep an eye out for this grammar and punctuation errors ^^
Otherwise, welcome to the site, Johanna ^^

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