Viber Aphon - District 3

[vecni]

Name: Viber Aphon
Age: 12
Gender: Male
District/Area: District 3
Appearance:

Dark hair, blue eyes, white color. He's doesn't very strong, so he can't lift something very heavy. He's short, about 5'1'' and his weight is 88 pounds. Thanks to his height and weight, he is very fast and can hide very well, but it isn't very perceptible, thanks to his economic status. He's has a great problem with his allergic sickness, if he smell something like or with dust, he has a terrible allergic reaction, and thanks to the polluted air of his district, he sneezes and coughs frequently.

He frequently wears clothes that someone normally uses to go to the church, thanks to the absence from his parents in his life, that buy his clothes, doesn't thinking about his opinion or preference. He has to wear glasses for cancel the problems caused by myopia. Viber use dental braces, but for his relief, it cannot be seen by anybody, thanks to the type of braces (clear braces).

Personality:

He is very intelligent, he reads a lot of books and study very much, but he doesn't have any friends, because he studies a lot, what make him a ''nerd'' to another people. Thanks to doesn't having any friends, he isn't very good with words.

He is very nice, but he doesn't care if he have friends or not, because he knows that if he continue to study hard, he will be important in his district, it is what made him so concentrated in study.

If he were in Hunger Games, he wouldn't use weapons, because he doesn't have any ability with those things, but he would run away successfully from the Cornucopia and from enemies. He can make traps (to humans and animals) and create some accessories. With these abilities, he could be something useful to strong players, but when he become something dispensible, he could run away from the enemies. Thanks to doesn't having any friends, he isn't very good with words, what can impede him from having a bargain with the tributes that can kill him.

History:

His parents are his only family, they work in the city hall and, thanks to their jobs, they're rich. When Viber was born, his father was working, and his mother started to working when she started to walk again after his birth. He doesn't had present parents. so he were raised by his babysitter.

When he completed 10 years, his father thought that he doesn't needed someone to babysit him anymore, so he stay everyday, alone in his house after come back from school, waiting his parents come back, but when they come back, they just say to him go to bed. He stay these hours reading book about school, history of Panem, Hunger Games, how to make traps and accessories to be prepared if he were to the games, that everyone in his district have fear.

Thanks to the long time that he stay at home, he doesn't have social life with another people. But he thinks that this fact it isn't important, because if he study hard, he will be important, and if he become someone important, his parents could give more attention to him.

Codeword: odair
Comments/Other:

I'm brazillian, I don't understand everything, so something can be wrong.

I doesn't know if I have to talk in first or third person, please say to me

[WT]

Hello, Vecni! Welcome to THGRPG. =)

First or third person doesn't matter, as long as you don't switch in the middle of a post. We even have some people who use second (where the main character is "you" instead of "I" or "he"), but not very many, since that can be difficult.

Viber is a good character so far, but he isn't finished. We ask for at least two paragraphs in appearance and three each in personality and history, with each paragraph including five sentences. (So, ten sentences for appearance and fifteen each for personality and history.) Anything is open to write about, from clothing to whether Viber wishes he had siblings, but if you feel like you've run out of ideas, feel free to ask!

Finally, may I hazard a guess that your first language is Portuguese? Overall your English is very good, but you have some grammar errors (for example, "He's doesn't very strong" should be "He isn't very strong") and occasional word choice problems (people are raised, not created, by their babysitters; also, the English translation of "simpatico" is not "simpatic," but "nice"). I tell you this not to insult you (seriously, your English is great, I'm impressed) but just so that you're aware of the problems. Nothing makes the bio difficult to understand, but some of the errors are distracting. If you have anyone who would be willing to look over your writing, enlisting their help would not be a bad idea; otherwise, I think it's just a matter of needing practice. (Whatever you do, don't use an online grammar checker. They get tense and verb conjugation wrong all the time. A simple spell check will catch things like "simpatic," though, and there is in fact a spell check button built into the site—it's right next to the post and preview buttons below the reply box.)

So: expand the bio, proofread it some, and then post again here. After that you'll be accepted and ready to start RPing!

[vecni]

Thank you for the help!
I was sure that it could have some errors. I forgot to correct "doesn't very strong" and I forgot the correct choice of "raised" and "created".
I'll edit and try to make it better.

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