Chai Jones | District 1

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 Chai Jones

Age: 15

Gender: Female

District/Area: District 1

Face Claim: Alexa Nikolas

Appearance 

You probably don’t know me and that’s fine because you are about to. I’m Chai and I was born 15 years ago on May 26. The sad part is I have a twin named Cali who looks 10 times better than me but I will tell you about myself and let you decide. I am a 5’ 5, 180 pound, dark haired girl. People usually are shocked when they see me because they don’t know I exist. But this wonderful “tale” is not about Cali my 5' 7, 170 pound, dark hair with highlights freak. It is about me Chai Jones. 

My eyes are a light/dark brown color with a little sparkle in them. By sparkle I mean they shine almost to a sparkle in them. I have the weirdest nose ever. My mother said that one is slightly larger than the other which is why I can never ever get nose jewelry. I would never consider myself ugly nor cute because I am who I am and that person is beautiful in her heart.  

Personality

I have my own style and that style is very what you would say unique. I don’t like wearing 13 inch shoes with a bunch of heavy gold on them. My simple look I imagine is a t-shirt, jeans, and regular sneakers. District 1 is very close to the Capitol so we tend to wear weird clothes like them which my terrible parents say are unique. Unique is something that you have in your own way. Not something everyone does or wears. It comes from the heart. 

I am the type of kid to go in a corner and just read. My favorite author is Susie Michaels who is best known for her book The Call Deep Within, How Birds Fly, and her bestselling Kings and Queens. She lives here in District 1, which is like extremely cool! I had the chance to meet her but my parents said that reading “rots” your brain. Especially the books that tell you how to live your life. They just don’t understand how books work. I’m a book genius when it comes to Susie and they ruined my one chance to meet her. 

Love isn’t my thing. If you want to talk about love in front of me you better run. I hate it, it just seems so useless to die over. All the girls in school just sit around wasting their life talking about love when they could be talking about how they are going to live their lives. The only people I do love is my family because they will always be the people I think about forever. If it’s a boy then he would be the perfect boy for me. Just like me with glasses. But it’s not something a need to worry about now because for the next 3 years I am eligible for the Hunger Games and I need to worry about my life before anything else. 

History 

It all basically started 20 seconds before me when Cali Jones was born. Little did my parents know she would be more successful than me in school. 20 seconds later old Chai was born. Little did I want to believe I was going to one day soon be a doctor and save lives. But I had to go through some difficulties first. Like when I was three Cali cut my hair. It was terrible experience. I honestly thought at three years old I was going to go bald! Leave it up to Cali to do something like that. 2 awful years later she came back in action. When we were five in Kindergarten I got a higher math grade than her so she ripped up my assignments for a whole month. She is just terrible! 

For the rest of my life she has gotten me in trouble with my teachers, parents, and principal. I have been basically living a nightmare because I have gotten detentions, suspensions, and I got grounded for things I never did. Nobody cares either. I tried standing up to my sister and it got me a detention because she lied and said that I smacked her hand. I can’t do anything without that demon ruining it. 

For instance for auditions for a play came along she locked me in a closet because I was auditioning for the same character she wanted to play. I wound up being a stupid tree. The only good thing that has really happened to me since then is when I got accepted into the enrichment program at school. That was a great thing that I really needed in my life and I am honored to be a part of it. I am so happy to have shared my wonderful life with you and hope that you have enjoyed this “tale”. 

-Fin 

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[maverick hale 🌧️ d5 [nyte]]

Hey dear! This bio just has a few kinks to work out before Chai can be on her way to D1!

First and foremost, maybe you should go into a little more detail. Sometimes you simply mention Cali (i.e the first paragraph) assuming that we already know who she is. It'd be great just to go into a little detail, ease us into her whole story.

Also, you make an assertion that Chai will one day be a famous doctor. Since this is in first person, you cannot write about anything that she doesn't know immediately. As this is essentially her speaking and not a narrator, does she think she will be a famous doctor? Does she want to be a famous doctor? Please explain.

I'm having a very hard time understanding some of her background.

Like when I was three Cali cut my hair. It was terrible, I cried for weeks. I thought I was going to go bald! It didn’t take her another 2 years to ruin my life again.

What do you mean by two years? What is the significance of another two years?

All in all, this bio shows amazing promise and I can't wait to see your writing in action but I really think that you should read over this bio and try to add a bit more explanation. Feel free to PM me if you have any further questions, I am here to help!

Thank you so much<33

~Nyte

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[maverick hale 🌧️ d5 [nyte]]

this is such a great improvement thank you!

unfortunately i've talked to staff and we decided authors wouldn't be able to move between the districts so just take that out and Chai will be accepted!!

Thanks you so much again!

~Nyte

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Accepted!