Two Capitol residents coming!

[zachary]

Name: Daniel Mota
Age: 33
Gender: Male
District/Area: Capitol
Appearance:

He has a lighter build than my previous character James, but he has a beard on too. He also wears black clothes more often than not, because he does like his job at Flickerman's. Since he is one of the show's producers, he apparently is larger than most of them, sitting at 10 feet.
He feels fine with his job, mainly because he wants to live in the Capitol AND be a major broadcaster at the same time. He thinks that all other people, except for tributes, are secretly anti-Capitol rebels without causes. Nevertheless, like James, he does wear a kind smile.

Personality:

He is based after a certain man I know on NGC with an attitude and a mighty BANHAMMER. Born of two broadcasters, names Darion and Dorothy Mota, former rebels turned Capitol residents, Daniel is a sweet man, except when he's near rebels or anyone to battle him or challenge the Capitol.
He is one of the executive producers of the Ceaser Flickerman Show, and feels confident about his job. You see, he watched this show when he was a youngster, about jnHFpO0i years old. Daniel thought of Ceasear as an influence to him, and he hopes to impress him off set.
He was born without any problems whatsoever, but he has a sister named Bea without a pet.

History:

He has a long history: he was born in District 8, former Mississipi, but was found as a calm, laughing baby in the hospital, potentially with a love for late-night TV, as he giggled at everything Flickerman. When he was 13, he entered broadcasting courses at his local high school.
He was one of the top scorers in his class, and was loved by his teacher. At 16, he learned how to drive, passed, and now drives Panem's equivalent of a Ferrari. He was hired by Jack the Bald-Headed Guy (a supernatural), the studio head, to work with Ceaser Flickerman, and he was super stoked.
He loves his job because he loves humour, and finds it in Ceasear.

[Baby Wessex d9 [earthling]]

Hi Zachary!

I'm Kay and I've looked over this bio. First, the title has confused me. Is this one bio...? Whose bio is it? Please modify the title to be in the standard format:

[Full Name] | [District]

Then, we need lot more details about Daniel's 32 years in Panem! Give us another 4-5 sentences of appearance. Does he participate in Capitolite fashion? How so? Any modifications?

You seem to have gotten a dice code stuck in the middle of the Personality section. Can you fix this? Also can you remove the reference to NHC and Banhammer, since it's not relevant to Daniel's personality? We also don't have Flickerman as a played character here, although Daniel could still be the producer of a talk show. Maybe think more about this and develop your own talk show for Panem. What would it be like? What sort of skits would they do? Why is Daniel good at running this talk show?

Also, he needs to have problems to be a real person. Tell us about his flaws, why some of his coworkers don't like him. Does he date? Is it difficult for him?

Finally, we don't allow residents to move from Districts to the Capitol or vice versa. Please remove this detail. He can still have been born in the Capitol and be fascinated by the bayous of District Eight.

Post a reply back when you've made these changes.