Carter Brown | District 7

[~ Speedy ~]

 Carter Brown

Age: 16

Gender: Male

District/Area: District 7

Face Claim: Roshon Fegan

Appearance 

I am a 5' 5 boy that has never experienced luxury in life. My name is Carter Brown and today I would like to share my life with you guys. Being born in District 7 I have dingy clothes. I really wish I could have better clothes but at least I have something. I have a somewhat deep voice that goes higher as I sing. It really isn't that bad. 

I wear glasses and under those squarish black glasses are dark brown eyes. On top of all that I have think dark brown curly hair. And yes it is naturally curly. Nothing done to it at all. I have chubby cheeks that shine through a room when I smile because they are so adorable and big. I also have medium sized ears that I can move without touching them. Cool right?  The one thing I don't like about myself is my nose. It literally looks like you could shove a highlighter up it because it is so big.

Personality

I have an adventurous spirit. I always like to roam schools or go into woods or just explore places. It is just so much fun to me! I guess half of the time I am just doing it to get away from people. But nevertheless my adventurous spirit will never bun out no matter what. Only if someone ruins it by saying something me and let down.  

Some people would describe me as shy. I guess its just because I don't talk to a lot of people and I am really quiet. I don't talk because people that try to talk to me talk about dumb stuff or they ask me to do/help them with their homework. I just like to stay to myself and live my life. Its just the way I operate. So don't hate because I do things independently.

I work alone. I don't like working with others because they can just steal my work and say they did it. I just don't want to be given a bad grade for something someone stole from me. If I ever have to work with someone I will not let them take the poster or anything home because they will find something to take my name off. So basically you would say that I am independent. Oh well that is just me. 

History

My life probably would have never started if it wasn't for that doctor. I wasn't breathing at all so a doctor ran me to the nearest oxygen pump they had. I probably should have mentioned earlier that I have asthma. It is not a huge rare case but it is something. I still owe that doctor even though he doesn't remember me. It was 16 years ago and there are plenty of babies that probably looked like me over the years. Hopefully I can do something to thank him.  

My family isn't the richest or the poorest but I am happy right where I am. I wouldn't want to be anywhere else in Panem right now because I am with the best family a boy could have. I wasn't always so perky about life though. When I was little and saw the other tributes from other Districts I would always be jealous because they had a better and wealthier life than I did. It was so frustrating but I stopped caring at the age of 9 years old. That's when I realized it didn't need luxury in life because all my luxury was with my wonderful caring family. 

I love the way my life is now and that will never change. Things couldn't be better! I have a happy healthy family and a roof over my head. And I get food everyday so that is all I need. I don't need all those fancy clothes or houses. All I need is food, water, and my wonderful loving family. I hope I have been a great narrator of my life and I hope you have enjoyed!  

[~ Speedy ~]

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[✨ zozo.]

Hi Speedy,

This is off to a good start but there's a few things you'll need to do before this can be accepted:

Appearance

- Can you please flesh out these paragraphs a bit more? The first paragraph only has three sentences describing Carter's appearance. Try describing his clothes, the way he walks, any quirks or habits he has, body language. Also, Carter needs an appearance flaw. Medium-sized ears aren't a flaw, as the size of your ears doesn't effect your ability to hear. Maybe try talk about scars he has, greasy hair, bitten-down nails? The possibilities are endless.

Personality

- There wouldn't be any Science Fairs in District Seven, as the kids are taught mainly industry-related subjects, and there definitely wouldn't be any National competitions since the Districts are not allowed to communicate with each-other.
- This entire section doesn't really talk about Carter's personality, as it mainly discusses his hobbies. Feel free to keep that in, but I'll need to see a lot more personality traits. What is he like around his friends? His family? How does he handle being put under pressure? If you need some ideas or help, check out this guide by our member Death, or have a look at this personality trait generator to get you started.

Post back when you've made some changes and we will take another look. Thanks!

[~ Speedy ~]

Alright thank you ^^. I will do that now.

[~ Speedy ~]

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[~ Speedy ~]

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[✨ zozo.]

Hey Speedy,

A little reminder to please wait 48 hours between each 'bump' post.

You don't seem to have added an appearance flaw - please add one into that section to adhere to site standards. Also, I still need a bit more in your personality sections. Each paragraph MUST be a minimum of 5 sentences - you only have one paragraph that is more than 5 sentences.

Thanks.

[~ Speedy ~]

Bump please....... If you aren't super busy.

[✨ zozo.]

Thanks for making those changes Speedy.

accepted.