Margaret Kelsey

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Name: Margaret Kelsey
Age: 16
Gender: Female
District/Area: District 4
Appearance:

Appearance Text here (Margaret has golden locks of hair with baby blue eyes. It is hard to see her beauty through the constant dirt on her face. She is 6 foot 5, tall for her age, and is very skinny from lack of food.    She looks like her mother. She has feet that never bear shoes, and she usually wears her older cousins old dresses, ripped and dirty dresses.)[/blockquote
Personality: 

Personality Text here (Margaret is kind and wouldnt hurt someone if they didnt hurt hurt her first. She despises the hunger games. She has a talent for throwing knifes, as she has a wall in her room she used to throw kitchen knifes at, and now it has become a way to deal with stress.     When angry she will take her anger out on her brothers. She loves her family, but gets frustrated when she has to do everything. Peacekeepers make her sick, and citizens of the capitol make her tense and stressed.    She has many friends who all can agree she is very nice. She loves gardening and swimming. Her mothers soup is gross to her, nothing compared to the sticky buns she makes on a good day.)

History:

History Text here (Margaret has two brothers, Bailey Kelsey and Kiril Kelsey. She is the oldest, as Kiril is 14 and Bailey is 15. Her mother is a baker and her father fishes. However in his free time, he helps run a butcher shop. Margaret helps her mother, and her brothers help make nets for their father.     Her cousins are some of the richer familys, and they often lend things to the family. When Margaret was little they would often bring her toys and baby food. Every month they visit, bringing with them food and clothes.   Margaret experienced violence when she was eight, her older brother, Tyler was caught starting a rebellion, and to pay each member of the family was whipped five times in front of him. Two days later, he was executed. Ever since she has always not shared her true opinion, afraid she would suffer the fate her brother had. Each year for the Hunger Games, she wears a veil,afraid she will be reconized as his sister and be given especially bad luck in the Hunger Games.)

Other:

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Dec 23, 2015 13:28:10 GMT -5 superpig said:

Name: Margaret Kelsey
Age: 16
Gender: Female
District/Area: District 4
Appearance:

Appearance Text here (Margaret has golden locks of hair with baby blue eyes. It is hard to see her beauty through the constant dirt on her face. She is 6 foot 5, tall for her age, and is very skinny from lack of food.    She looks like her mother. She has feet that never bear shoes, and she usually wears her older cousins old dresses, ripped and dirty dresses.)[/blockquote
Personality: 

Personality Text here (Margaret is kind and wouldnt hurt someone if they didnt hurt hurt her first. She despises the hunger games. She has a talent for throwing knifes, as she has a wall in her room she used to throw kitchen knifes at, and now it has become a way to deal with stress.     When angry she will take her anger out on her brothers. She loves her family, but gets frustrated when she has to do everything. Peacekeepers make her sick, and citizens of the capitol make her tense and stressed.    She has many friends who all can agree she is very nice. She loves gardening and swimming. Her mothers soup is gross to her, nothing compared to the sticky buns she makes on a good day.)

History:

History Text here (Margaret has two brothers, Bailey Kelsey and Kiril Kelsey. She is the oldest, as Kiril is 14 and Bailey is 15. Her mother is a baker and her father fishes. However in his free time, he helps run a butcher shop. Margaret helps her mother, and her brothers help make nets for their father.     Her cousins are some of the richer familys, and they often lend things to the family. When Margaret was little they would often bring her toys and baby food. Every month they visit, bringing with them food and clothes.   Margaret experienced violence when she was eight, her older brother, Tyler was caught starting a rebellion, and to pay each member of the family was whipped five times in front of him. Two days later, he was executed. Ever since she has always not shared her true opinion, afraid she would suffer the fate her brother had. Each year for the Hunger Games, she wears a veil,afraid she will be reconized as his sister and be given especially bad luck in the Hunger Games.)

Other:

[sbeeg]

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