jason adams

[jason dravek]

Name: jase
Age: 13
Gender: Male
District/Area: District 3
Appearance:

5 foot 2 , skinny, blonde hair, lot of muscles because of past experiences,many scars from being picked on after the "incident"

Personality:

shy because he tripped over his own feet at a reaping,smart because he is at home a lot after the "incident"and he reads anything he can get his hands on

History:

mother died at age 8 of neumonia, 2 sisters and a brother. the sisters names are sami and adaline. his brothers name is jonathen

Codeword: <img src="http://i41.tinypic.com/16h2ibt.png">
Comments/Other:

[Sunrise Rainier D2 // [Thundy]]

Hiya!

I can't really accept your character just yet, because you need to fix a lot of things--

1) Could you please put the information into actual sentences? It's a bit vague at the moment and it doesn't tell us much about your character. Maybe "He's shy because blah blah blah.." and "He's smart because blah blah blah" Just add details and don't just list traits.

2) Also, could you please add more information into the appearance, personality, and history sections? A paragraph for each would be nice.

3) Your codeword is incorrect, but you're on the right track.

Fix everything, and then I will accept!